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This is a very good song, the intro reminds me a bit of A Clockwork Orange. The song, at times, almost has an oriental feel to it. Each sound complements the other. Very well made.
Mike
Author's Response:
thanks for the review mike!
i don know what clockwork orange is tho.
oriental? lol ok
thanks for the comments!
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In my opinion, this is the best song you have made so far, and I have liked all of your stuff I have heard. The drums add a whole new dimension to the song. The guitar is very well played. Very good job, keep on making new audio.
P.S. Sorry it has taken me so long to review, I forgot for a little while, and then got busy with stuff outside the house.
Again, great song.
Mike
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot man! The drums were added by Erkie, and all drum credit belongs to him.
Thanks.
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This sounds pretty much identical to the original. You play the guitar very good. I look forward to your future submissions. Nice to hear some classic rock on the Audio Portal. If you need someone for Vocals or Bass, I would be glad to help out.
Mike
Author's Response:
That would be excellent, man. Vocals are not my strong point, and I lack a bass guitar, so I will almost undoubtadly get back to you about that.
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"The best Ambient song I have heard in the AP!"
Really great job on this, smooth and relaxing. This is truly a great song. I really don't know what else to say other than I greatly enjoyed it and you did a fine job on this!
Mike
Author's Response:
Heh, mucho thankos senor
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This is quite an excellent song, it actually reminds me of something that would be on the old Sonic video games. It has a very catchy beat, at times it has a bit of an Arabian feel to it. Very well made, good job.
Mike
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I don't understand why people are voting it down, well made, nice techno/trance feel to it, hope my review helps!
Mike
Author's Response:
thanks dude, if u didnt know already there are fags that go around and vote zero on everything they see..... kinda sad actually. thanks for ur review... too bad i couldnt get more feedback
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In my opinion at least. It has elements of metal to it, the voices seem unbalanced from the music at times, however, this isn't necessarily a bad thing. Quite a strange mix if I do say so my self. Good job.
Mike
Author's Response:
The voices arent meant to be quite together, but i cant get the guitar quite right :S I'm getting a mate to put some chords down so i can remake this a little better. Thank you for the review, and its ok, you can say its awful :) I wont spite you for it:)
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It sounds like you have put a great deal of effort into this track. Very well made, everything is very melodic, yet chaotic simultaneously. So many beats to it going at once, all working together in harmony. You did a very good job on this, very enjoying to listen to.
Keep up the good work.
Mike
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I like to think it sounds a little different each time, reflecting the personal perception of the track based on a spiritual moment within. Or maybe meditation and green things make me go crazy :) Either's good. Thanks a lot for the review! I call this sound Acid-Jazz-Trance, I dont know if there is a real name apart from experimental really.
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If I may recommend, next time try adding you singing the lyrics to it, some Bass in the background would help out a lot, seeing as Pink Floyd has a lot of deep end sounds, if you have fruity loops, you could use the program to recreate the Bass Riff, or, perhaps ask someone else on Newgrounds to help you out.
Anyhow, you played the guitar quite well, and made a very good cover.
Mike
Author's Response:
Thanks, man. This song doesn't have any lyrics, though. It's just a quiet, guitar riff piece.
But thanks man.
And I don't have fruity loops, but I plan to get it.
But thanks, man.
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The original beat is, for lack of a better description, very bad ass. However, the majority of this song feels rather thin, it is in desperate need of having other "instruments" accompanying the starting beat.
My recommendation, lower the volume of the FL Kick, and add a few other sounds to complement the starting beat, say Bass, Key Board, synth, whatever you like.
You have potential in my opinion, which is why I am being rather critical on this. Keep on practicing.
Mike
Author's Response:
Thanks for the constructive review. Next time when making a song, I'll sure pay attention to this review. When I made this song, I also wasn't as good in FL back then as I am now.
My recent song is ayb, and that already had some more diversity... Thought it still isn't perfect.
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