BaronVonBadGuy
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Poem - Earthly Battle
7/17/07 by BaronVonBadGuy
A subtle difference
Life unlike before
Trusting with doubtful apprehension
Paranoia revealing all lies
Earth consumed with death
Born again in flame
Dread, it's ever present erection
My sword bending backward upon me
Fight for restful peace
A battle in vain
Lurching through the mire of stagnant hope
Satan piercing from every side
Enemies rejoice
Grinning with poison
Through lies they encompass my escape
In futile efforts I stand broken
Death, a kind embrace
A rest from suffer
There is no hope in this world of lies
But Through God, salvation, end of pain
~BaronVonBadGuy
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9/12/10
HAHA I BET YOU DON'T CHECK OLD NEWPOSTS ANYMORE.
7/19/07
hello
Hi?
7/19/07
Ohshit, I went off topic. Swell poem.
/doublepost
lolkthnx! <3
7/19/07
How's that absinthe?
It was amazing, utterly fantastically, amazing. I don't have enough money to buy another bottle, so I ordered an Absinthe kit from http://www.greendevil.com/
unfortunately I have another 8 days until it will be ready to drink. I really recommend picking up a bottle some time.
7/18/07
Im not goth or anything but very good Grim poem that i thought was great.
Thank you my good man, glad you liked it so much. I'm getting more responses here than on DeviantArt!
7/18/07
are u possessed?
Sure.
7/18/07
*Applause*
Wow, that was beautiful..
Thanks, I really appreciate it, I didn't think I'd get so much feedback here.
7/18/07
Now use this poem to create more music. You make some great bizarre and abstract stuff good sir. *tips hat*
Why thank you my good sir, I'm glad you both like my music and poetry, I haven't tried making music in such a long time, perhaps I should give it another shot. Thanks again.
7/18/07
Very grim, so it's not quite my cup of tea, but It's pretty good. Did you have to use erection, that doesn't exactly bring up the right image at first.
Thank you. I used erection in the terms to show the unresting delight dread appears to take in me. I'm at times psychotic, and often filled with profound amounts of fear and other such emotions. Again thanks for the feedback.